ffa_FirstCave

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Hi, Everyone

This is the first map I've made for altitude. It was my first attempt at using the altitude editor, and I know it isn't great, but I thought I'd post it here anyway to see what you guys think. If you have any suggestions etc. they're always appreciated! I'll try and make another map once I have time, hopefully it will be better

Here it is: http://www.mediafire.com/?9yilvytmyyy

[protest boy]

I flew around for a minute or two in the editor. I like the shapes, it's visually interesting. Supposed to be silhouettes, right? And there's a decent mix of narrow passages and wide open places which is good. I have a couple suggestions for improvements...

In several places it is hard to tell the difference between the walls you can collide with, and the background. They're too similar in brightness and color.

Also, perhaps it was intentional, but one of the places you pass through the edge of the screen and are led right into a wall. I must have killed myself 10 times just exploring the map.

And something minor, all your spawn points are pointing in the same direction. Maybe mix it up a bit by flipping some of them 180 degrees?