Omni's RAP

[Omni Vanitas]

Well I was doing this rap, see and I dunno.I need opinions


These street wonders
Look like thunders
All the same
But they are not sane
Ever wandered why, son?
‘Cause it’s all done
They’re like nuns without cloth
Or like a friggin silkworm moth

That’s what they tell you
They wont get a tattoo
C’mon man be straight
You know what they are, wicked gate
They are homeless
They don’t wear success
On their dress
They aint compressed
I'll make you guess with excess express unless you wanna undress or confess a damsel in distress nevertheless a fancy dress converts into a wedding dress playing chess and gran sayin' bless vs. the standing press

Now you know ‘em
You’ll be careful with the transparent gem
Don’t worry, there not gross like the gloss across the moss loss in the Spanish cross ‘cos I toss the loss in the doss being the boss
They’re tramps without Light, like Aladdin with Radin
I mean they are constantly nearby with a supply of fan untie hi-fi which spy stupidly on standby with bone dry, noobs at ball just like Rye under a water fly above a dragon’s eye on the fourth of July in the F.B.I over an apply of mince pie, aye, c’mon give it a dye!!

That’s what they tell you
They’ll eat bamboo
C’mon man be straight
You know what they ate
They are homeless
They don’t wear success
On the press
They aint compressed
I’ll make you guess with excess express unless you wanna undress or confess a damsel in distress nevertheless a fancy dress converts into a wedding dress playing chess and gran sayin' bless vs. the standing press.

I know you have to worry about your family
But homeless can be mistook stupidly and unfairly
Like in Beijing with a right wing ring, a thing similar to Xiaoping or M.L. King in spring bearing a benzene ring with a upswing ping in spring when Sting gives wring to Kwok-shing balancing on a friggin’ string like I fling the stinking travelling Ming.
Think about ‘em
They’re not brain stem in phlegm
How to know the difference between a beggar and a real homeless?
Easy, play chess with Tess and if she wins, Jess will egress in the noblesse



That’s what they tell you
They’ll totally screw
C’mon man be straight
You know some are bait
They are homeless
They don’t wear success
But wear stress
They aint compressed
I'll make you guess with excess express unless you wanna undress or confess a damsel in distress nevertheless a fancy dress converts into a wedding dress playing chess and gran sayin' bless vs. the standing press.


I nearly finished it :P


PS:No I'm not mad and this is my first rap

[Danielle]

You trollin'?

[Radium]

SS .

[Goose]

Epic!!!!!!!!!

My only critique would be to possibly change this part:

Originally Posted by Omni Vanitas

i mean they are constantly nearby with a suplí o fan untie hi-fi which spy stupidly on standby with bone dry rye under a water suplí above a dragon’s eye on the fourth of July in the F.B.I over a supply of mince pie, cm’on give it a dye!

To this:

Originally Posted by Omni Vanitas

i mean they are constantly nearby with a suplí o fan untie hi-fi which spy stupidly on standby with bone dry, noobs at ball just like rye under a water suplí above a dragon’s eye on the fourth of July in the F.B.I over a supply of mince pie, cm’on give it a dye!

BTW: U should challenge Kennedy and seeker to a rap battle

[ryebone]

thanks for the shoutout.

[Omni Vanitas]

Originally Posted by Goose

Epic!!!!!!!!!

My only critique would be to possibly change this part:


To this:


BTW: U should challenge Kennedy and seeker to a rap battle

Hmmm, ok it'll look cool.
Kennedy:Next week, not available this week

[Omni Vanitas]

Originally Posted by Danielle

You trollin'?

as in slang, yes

[Kennedy]

I will rap battle the shizzle out of this nizzle, fo' rizzle

[ufo]

thanks for the shoutout ken.

[Boko]

Originally Posted by ufo

thanks for the shoutout ken.

I wonder how many people actually get this, lol.